I confess. I wrote this the day I picked the prompt. Once I had made the prompt post I couldn't keep my mind from working on it. I might have messed with the wording a bit. Also if you want to join the Summer Writing Camp link up, it's HERE. It closes this Friday.
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Her
proximity was almost overwhelming. They had worked together for a long time
now. Every odd Thursday his boss would give her a call. But this train- the
seats were so small he could smell her hair without trying. She smelled
like ginger, as usual.
He had always
wanted to talk to her, to know her. How did she begin her trade? How had she
become such an expert? He remembered his first day meeting her. His boss had
went on and on about Trayton; he had never suspected that Trayton was a woman.
What did
she do outside of work?
But the
job called for silence. “No talking,” his boss had said. So they sat next each
other on the train as if they were strangers. Well, technically, they were.
Strangers. Actually.
In the
true sense of knowing each other, they didn’t. But he knew plenty about her, not just that she smelled of
ginger. She loved romance books, especially the ones by Carolyn Cane. She
always brought one to read on the train. Her voice was soft and quiet when
speaking to others. She was about 4’ 8’’. She liked to wear green. She always
had a window seat, but never looked out it. Except once. They had travelled
over a river. What about rivers, or that river, was so significant to her that she had gazed at it so intently?
The train
jumped. Their knees jostled and knocked together. Yet neither said a word.
He
wondered if she wondered about him.
That
would, of course, be ridiculous. But what if she did?
The train
slowed and finally pulled to a stop. There was the call to leave. He set his
newspaper in his seat and sighed. He left his brief case, and took hers
instead. It was identical to his own, except for one thing.
Hers had the
diamonds hidden in it.
Nice, very nice. I always enjoy your writing. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks! I was mildly proud of myself. :)
DeleteAwesome! Diamonds in a briefcase are ALWAYS intriguing. X) I love this middleman-type guy, whoever he is. It seems like he's on the wrong side of the law, but he doesn't seem like a dangerous, hardened type. I don't know, I like him. XD Good job! :D
ReplyDeleteI know. He's not the typical thief. I rather like him too.
DeleteGlad you liked it! :)
Yeah, I think the ether consumed it. . . or perhaps it was the bloath. . .
ReplyDeleteOh. Then I shall introduce you.
ReplyDeleteThe Bloath
by Shel Silverstein
In the undergrowth
There dwells a Bloath
Who feeds upon poets and tea.
Luckily, I know this about him
While he knows nothing of me!
(I just assumed that perhaps the bloath needed more variety in its diet and took to eating blogpost comments. :P)